Brandi Young

Rookie (06-01-89 / New Jersey)

Death - Poem by Brandi Young

Death is forever
So don't flirt with suicide

Death is painful
Stay away from knives

Death is not for lovers
So don't lie

Death is not for me
So don't even try

Death is clever
So be careful

Death is never fun
Stay away from strangers

Death is never pleasing
So don't get caught up in the hype

Death is never fair
So get use to it

Death is always occurring
So don't ignore it

Death is never what you expected
Sorry but it has to happen

Death is not for you
Please don't give up

Death is forever
Don't forget it

(5-15-05)


Comments about Death by Brandi Young

  • (4/9/2009 4:42:00 PM)


    Hello Brandi,
    I have read most of your poems and they are all so well written. I myself, love poetry. This one gets right to the point, well said. I love the way you wrote it. It just says so much.
    Keep up the good work.
    More poems please.
    Thank you,
    Leslie.
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  • (7/16/2008 12:44:00 AM)


    Hi Brandi Young, I am a new member.I read your death poem.Its very interesting and beautiful. I impressed in your poem 'Death is forever.........'. Welldone! I expect these kind of good poems from your end.
    Thanks
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  • (4/21/2008 12:49:00 PM)


    i tried to commit suicide in tenth grade. it was a rea bad expirience. love the poem and it means alot to me and most likely any other person whos been there. thx (Report) Reply

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  • ivory Harris (4/17/2008 10:32:00 AM)


    when I was in the 7th grade i wanted to kill myself.I had a friend help me out. You are doing a good thing with this poem. (Report) Reply

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  • (3/29/2008 6:15:00 AM)


    Its a very touching poem. (Report) Reply

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  • (3/4/2008 5:14:00 PM)


    this poem has helped me to stop wat i do or now did i am still emo but with out suicidal intent u have perfect talent have u read this depression by me?
    u should really read it
    talk soon     (Report) Reply

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  • (2/18/2008 3:50:00 AM)


    Brandi.. you express the finality of death seriously.... perfect poetic justice has been dished out here... *10* (Report) Reply

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  • (1/18/2008 11:53:00 AM)


    Brilliant! This poem expertly describes death. Brandi, it reminds me of my best friend who had a fatal accident with a gun and is no longer with us. Beutiful work! It brought the tears back again. Keep on writing for you posses a great talent. (Report) Reply

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  • (1/13/2008 10:29:00 PM)


    I have to say that is is soo true! (Report) Reply

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  • (12/27/2007 2:58:00 PM)


    this poem is true on so many levels and should be heeded as a warning for those who wish death upon themselves and others. Brandi good work! (Report) Reply

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  • (11/19/2007 7:56:00 AM)


    first time ive come across a poem telling people not to die, most talk about living life (as in to its fullest) . this sure is one of a kind! (Report) Reply

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  • (11/9/2007 11:09:00 AM)


    really good poem. one of these days maybe i read poems to where they will save my life. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/2/2007 8:32:00 PM)


    awww this is a good peom..
    its awesome..
    i hope you like miens too! ! =]]     (Report) Reply

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  • (9/9/2007 11:53:00 PM)


    This is a really good poem honey.........very touching (Report) Reply

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  • (6/1/2007 6:15:00 PM)


    OMG this is deep really I love it! ...Can I have a copy? LOL (Report) Reply

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  • (5/5/2007 9:46:00 PM)


    wow, that's pretty awesome. I wish I could write like that. (Report) Reply

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  • (3/21/2007 5:15:00 PM)


    cool poem dude.this poem rockz mi sockz (Report) Reply

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  • (3/20/2007 2:44:00 PM)


    deep poem.
    i just found this site today...but i think im gona like it..im very om, depressive.     (Report) Reply

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  • (1/24/2007 11:35:00 AM)


    wow...i cut my self but after reading this it makes me wonder.. (Report) Reply

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  • (1/23/2007 10:32:00 AM)


    Brandi
    this poem in a way has inspired me to stop what i do...you never know this poem may save a life...maybe even mine..so thank you and keep up the good work.
    Saisha     (Report) Reply

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