Death - Poem by Brandi Young

Together Forever (4/9/2009 4:42:00 PM)

Hello Brandi,
I have read most of your poems and they are all so well written. I myself, love poetry. This one gets right to the point, well said. I love the way you wrote it. It just says so much.
Keep up the good work.
More poems please.
Thank you,
Leslie.
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Rakesh Radhakrishnan (7/16/2008 12:44:00 AM)

Hi Brandi Young, I am a new member.I read your death poem.Its very interesting and beautiful. I impressed in your poem 'Death is forever.........'. Welldone! I expect these kind of good poems from your end.
Thanks
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Cody Charette (4/21/2008 12:49:00 PM)

i tried to commit suicide in tenth grade. it was a rea bad expirience. love the poem and it means alot to me and most likely any other person whos been there. thx (Report) Reply

ivory Harris (4/17/2008 10:32:00 AM)

when I was in the 7th grade i wanted to kill myself.I had a friend help me out. You are doing a good thing with this poem. (Report) Reply

Mel Maguire (3/29/2008 6:15:00 AM)

Its a very touching poem. (Report) Reply

Kill Me See If I Care E=m^o-CO+W (3/4/2008 5:14:00 PM)

this poem has helped me to stop wat i do or now did i am still emo but with out suicidal intent u have perfect talent have u read this depression by me?
u should really read it
talk soon (Report) Reply

Emancipation Planz (2/18/2008 3:50:00 AM)

Brandi.. you express the finality of death seriously.... perfect poetic justice has been dished out here... *10* (Report) Reply

Brian Holmes (1/18/2008 11:53:00 AM)

Brilliant! This poem expertly describes death. Brandi, it reminds me of my best friend who had a fatal accident with a gun and is no longer with us. Beutiful work! It brought the tears back again. Keep on writing for you posses a great talent. (Report) Reply

Abby Winslow (1/13/2008 10:29:00 PM)

I have to say that is is soo true! (Report) Reply

Edward Mainard (12/27/2007 2:58:00 PM)

this poem is true on so many levels and should be heeded as a warning for those who wish death upon themselves and others. Brandi good work! (Report) Reply

Tiffanie Lau (11/19/2007 7:56:00 AM)

first time ive come across a poem telling people not to die, most talk about living life (as in to its fullest) . this sure is one of a kind! (Report) Reply

dark rose (11/9/2007 11:09:00 AM)

really good poem. one of these days maybe i read poems to where they will save my life. (Report) Reply

Jade Plaisance (11/2/2007 8:32:00 PM)

awww this is a good peom..
its awesome..
i hope you like miens too! ! =]] (Report) Reply

Amie-Lee ...... (9/9/2007 11:53:00 PM)

This is a really good poem honey.........very touching (Report) Reply

B Brown (6/1/2007 6:15:00 PM)

OMG this is deep really I love it! ...Can I have a copy? LOL (Report) Reply

Sarah K (5/5/2007 9:46:00 PM)

wow, that's pretty awesome. I wish I could write like that. (Report) Reply

Nicky Palma (3/21/2007 5:15:00 PM)

cool poem dude.this poem rockz mi sockz (Report) Reply

miss genova (3/20/2007 2:44:00 PM)

deep poem.
i just found this site today...but i think im gona like it..im very om, depressive. (Report) Reply

Olivia Fuller (1/24/2007 11:35:00 AM)

wow...i cut my self but after reading this it makes me wonder.. (Report) Reply

i am alive cuz of raegan perkins (1/23/2007 10:32:00 AM)

Brandi
this poem in a way has inspired me to stop what i do...you never know this poem may save a life...maybe even mine..so thank you and keep up the good work.
Saisha (Report) Reply