Death Poem by Brandi Young

this poem is true on so many levels and should be heeded as a warning for those who wish death upon themselves and others. Brandi good work!

wow...i cut my self but after reading this it makes me wonder..

Brilliant! This poem expertly describes death. Brandi, it reminds me of my best friend who had a fatal accident with a gun and is no longer with us. Beutiful work! It brought the tears back again. Keep on writing for you posses a great talent.

this poem has helped me to stop wat i do or now did i am still emo but with out suicidal intent u have perfect talent have u read this depression by me? u should really read it talk soon

Its a very touching poem.

Death conclusion learning chapter of life.....///

Hello Brandi, I have read most of your poems and they are all so well written. I myself, love poetry. This one gets right to the point, well said. I love the way you wrote it. It just says so much. Keep up the good work. More poems please. Thank you, Leslie. =P

Hi Brandi Young, I am a new member.I read your death poem.Its very interesting and beautiful. I impressed in your poem 'Death is forever.........'. Welldone! I expect these kind of good poems from your end. Thanks by Rakesh

i tried to commit suicide in tenth grade. it was a rea bad expirience. love the poem and it means alot to me and most likely any other person whos been there. thx

when I was in the 7th grade i wanted to kill myself.I had a friend help me out. You are doing a good thing with this poem.