aiden murdock

Rookie (Feburary 16,1992 / Maryland)

Canopy Of Closure - Poem by aiden murdock

a world must become numb
as society's social chain
advances through our empty
Its espionage
we are the stolen

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  • G. Murdock (11/20/2006 1:56:00 PM)

    Hey Murdock, this says a bookfull in fewer words. I like the metaphor of thievery from the overall. The thought of society stealing our identity in the line 'we are the stolen' enocourages outrage although we seem to let it happen because it occurs or 'advances through our open ('empty') window. I restate the fact this says alot with few words. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 20, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 26, 2010

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