Captivating Song Poem by Aldo Kraas

Captivating Song



Because I see them very clear in my head
and I vision my dream to be of a very different place
That I never set my foot in it
But I remember seeing the ocean and inthe middle of this lake there was a Castle with iron gates and stained glass windows
The garden of this castle was very huge
And in the garden they had olive trees and all kinds of herbs in one Side
Onthe north side of the garden they planted their fresh vegetables
To tell you the truth I don't know who owns this castle.
But in the balcony of that castle I could see a girl throwing flowers into the Sea and ashes maybe of her beloved husband or her beloved Mother
It was hard for me to tell or know
But the dreams had been good
And I wished that I could be in the dreams with that beautiful women in Order to comsole her

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 14 July 2014

Sounds like a captivating dream you had. Love the story this piece tells. Only issue I have is you state it is the ocean but in the same line you write, in the middle of this lake. Other than that little mistake I think this is a great write!

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* Sunprincess * 09 July 2014

.............wow this is a captivating dream and a fantastic poem....enjoyed...

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Aldo Kraas

Aldo Kraas

Sao Paulo Brazil
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