Tuesday, April 12, 2011
Captivating Song Comments
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Because I see them very clear in my head
and I vision my dream to be of a very different place
That I never set my foot in it
But I remember seeing the ocean and inthe middle of this lake there was a Castle with iron gates and stained glass windows
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* Sunprincess *
09 July 2014
.............wow this is a captivating dream and a fantastic poem....enjoyed...
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12/23/2025 1:11:25 PM # 1.0.0
Sounds like a captivating dream you had. Love the story this piece tells. Only issue I have is you state it is the ocean but in the same line you write, in the middle of this lake. Other than that little mistake I think this is a great write!