Captive Life Poem by Saint Cynosure

Captive Life

Rating: 4.8


I live my life inside a jail,
with walls unseen by all.
Receding steps to bottomless depths,
forever I feel I fall.
The fall don't hurt its when you land,
Ive been told by many.
But forever to fall,
is forever to fear.
With no end in sight,
not any.
The truth I live is hard to take,
if you knew you would agree.
I'm in disguise I hide myself,
myself must hide from me.
The truth however does not change,
it cant be controlled like fate.
But it can be denied,
to find comfort in lies,
for a fate thats more pleasant to take.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Antonio Liao 02 September 2008

you have such a deep poem that only....my soul can see...beyond human.... imagination... a very good one...ten for you... thank you

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Dee Daffodil 31 August 2008

I guess we all have walls of some sort...prisons of our own making perhaps... I'm all in favour of happy endings...even if they are only in dreams. Nicely done! Hugs, Dee

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