Moushumi moushumi

Castaway - Poem by Moushumi moushumi

what will happen if I castaway
what will happen if I come back...
would I wait to see your splintered eyes?
would I leave you to your reviewed lies?
there was a life without you
when life stopped to bring me the
valor of living in earth, with mystic flavor!
at times I struggled to survive for your sake
now only breathe to look your ways as i look mine
at the end we will meet again
to meet our promises castaway...

Comments about Castaway by Moushumi moushumi

  • Tom Balch (11/26/2008 7:38:00 AM)

    A deep and meaningful piece,10+ regards Tom (Report) Reply

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  • (11/16/2008 8:12:00 AM)

    Wonderful composition.....loved it. thanks (Report) Reply

  • Palas Kumar Ray (10/4/2008 3:19:00 PM)

    Life left behind and the Life ahead.
    The time placing the mind in a crossroad.
    Hard to decide which way to take.
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  • (7/13/2008 12:47:00 AM)

    That indeed precisely is a life! (Report) Reply

  • (6/18/2008 9:31:00 AM)

    i think she has low memory power, bcoz she is wonderfull writer n she is forgotten dat.anyway gud poems, still waiting 4 gud ones. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 13, 2005

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 9, 2009

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