Castaway Poem by Moushumi moushumi

Castaway

Rating: 5.0


what will happen if I castaway
what will happen if I come back...
would I wait to see your splintered eyes?
would I leave you to your reviewed lies?
there was a life without you
when life stopped to bring me the
valor of living in earth, with mystic flavor!
at times I struggled to survive for your sake
now only breathe to look your ways as i look mine
at the end we will meet again
to meet our promises castaway...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Balch 26 November 2008

A deep and meaningful piece,10+ regards Tom

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 16 November 2008

Wonderful composition.....loved it. thanks

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Subbaraman N V 13 July 2008

That indeed precisely is a life!

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Gopi Mannur 18 June 2008

i think she has low memory power, bcoz she is wonderfull writer n she is forgotten dat.anyway gud poems, still waiting 4 gud ones.

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