Moon D Shadow Poem by Moushumi moushumi

Moon D Shadow

Rating: 5.0


Moonlit ego! don't dare promise
the world
your cheating shine: as all came to know
you are nothing; a shadow!
you wait for the dark
that too wasted on the lovers' bark,
sigh on the face, on the shadowed grimace
eavesdropp every song and
exert all the vibes to the world rest!

04/9/09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anand Madhukar 16 September 2009

Imaginative and interesting.

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Kesav Easwaran 15 September 2009

nice imagination Mousumi...powerfully beautiful...thanks...10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 06 September 2009

wow! exceptional thought out! .......> moonlit ego..! ........fine diction! 10+

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Indira Babbellapati 04 September 2009

yeah, moon the cheater!

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