At the onset we start moving
To each other
In pursuit of happiness, we make
The move to gather other
In fulfilling the joy the mind
Dictates elusive terms
At the end body remains hanging and
The bridge droops with tears……….
2nd Feb2009
oh...touching. wonderfully expressed maam. thank you very much.
hmmmmmmmmm some how my thoughts are penned here........great write and iam glad i found this
wonderful message hide in this poetic piece.... written with love...with great concept touching....and guides me to reflect.... do i find true happiness? 10++++ for this ma'am.....
love seems to be shadowed by stooping of bridge between two poles of heart, let there be rise of bridge by light of love, excellent thought,10/10., thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
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bridging the gap using body and mind...a difficult compromise to achieve in love and married life...a beautiful poem bridge you build here, Mousumi...over, flowing emotional undercurrents...a suspension brige this life always is! ...10+