Bridge Poem by Moushumi moushumi

Bridge

Rating: 5.0


At the onset we start moving
To each other
In pursuit of happiness, we make
The move to gather other
In fulfilling the joy the mind
Dictates elusive terms
At the end body remains hanging and
The bridge droops with tears……….


2nd Feb2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 02 February 2009

bridging the gap using body and mind...a difficult compromise to achieve in love and married life...a beautiful poem bridge you build here, Mousumi...over, flowing emotional undercurrents...a suspension brige this life always is! ...10+

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 08 February 2009

oh...touching. wonderfully expressed maam. thank you very much.

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Reshma Ramesh 07 February 2009

hmmmmmmmmm some how my thoughts are penned here........great write and iam glad i found this

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Miriam Maia Padua 07 February 2009

wonderful message hide in this poetic piece.... written with love...with great concept touching....and guides me to reflect.... do i find true happiness? 10++++ for this ma'am.....

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Dr.subhendu Kar 04 February 2009

love seems to be shadowed by stooping of bridge between two poles of heart, let there be rise of bridge by light of love, excellent thought,10/10., thanks for sharing

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Lynda Robson 02 February 2009

A lovely piece full of meaning, well written, 10 Lynda xx

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