Wednesday, November 15, 2017

Castles Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here lies my castle upon these grains of sand
I've molded every piece with my very own hands
This vision of my fortress has always lived inside of me
I've built it by the ocean for the entire world to see
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Todd Michael Cusato-Millar
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Chinedu Dike 09 March 2018

Work of an active imagination embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A nice creation Todd. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Jazib Kamalvi 18 November 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Todd. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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George Dietz 15 November 2017

time to rebuild your castle! Great poem of hope and enthusiasim!

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