Monday, October 24, 2011

Catatonic Optimist Comments

Rating: 5.0

Candy with breakfast makes everything brighter
Turns my feelings hygenic, and make orange juice lighter
Junk mail and traffic are no longer my hassles
When I take from a vial that makes me see castles
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Akhtar Jawad 25 May 2020

Catatonic Optimism You'll collide with cartoon vission Taking rides inside bubble's Flying lightyears from any trouble...........beautiful lines.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 December 2018

Optimism! ! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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