Friday, October 2, 2015

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It’s been such a long time,
I try to walk in a straight line,
Everything’s changed on a dime,
Not everything is fine,
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Molly Dorhn
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Chinedu Dike 26 October 2015

Unpleasant changes in attribute by good friends can be very painful, especially when one who has changed is very dear to the heart. But then, who can question the unchanging nature of change. A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely penned from the heart with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Molly. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 02 October 2015

Change in humans is often sad, but if you look closely, many times you'll find that it is an addition to who they are and not replacement. The original is still in there somewhere. Thanks for sharing, Molly

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