Changes Within Poem by Jabil Manandhar

Changes Within

Rating: 5.0


Sparkling zone unto the transit of fests,
Eat, drink, and celebrate the moment.
Help me out, oh my loved one!
Don't let me escape from your memory.

Hold me throughout the season,
Dip your finger into my heart,
Catch up with all my savings,
Till your finger glows like love!

My loved one, let me tell you this!
I was confused when left alone and pale,
In the dungeon of unfortunate fate,
There I'd inhaled some poison ivy,
That eliminated my beautiful dreams!

But after those uncounted nights,
My day arrived, greeting warmly,
With half a dream I woke,
From my bed of rusty nails.

The Sun, once again,
shined in the reality of my dream,
The brighter side of me re-entered,
He looked stronger,
And he knew that he was expected,
Looking at me differently,
With the vision of change!

In the transit of fests,
I struggled to live,
Lived a life, a million times,
Free from those devils,
And away from those black shores!

Happy Ending!
(Till Next Time)

Thursday, August 31, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: changes
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
'Changes Within' is a poem that explores personal transformation and the journey towards happiness and fulfillment. The poem begins by setting a festive and celebratory atmosphere, symbolizing a joyful and vibrant state of being. The speaker pleads for the support and love of their cherished ones, emphasizing the importance of not being forgotten. The line 'Hold me throughout the season' suggests a desire for enduring companionship and emotional support. The metaphor of dipping a finger into the speaker's heart represents a deep connection and understanding between the speaker and their loved ones. It implies that the speaker wants their loved ones to truly know them and to be actively involved in their life, symbolized by the image of the finger glowing like love. The following stanza reveals a past period of suffering and isolation. The speaker describes being alone and pale in a dungeon, surrounded by unpleasant experiences and the metaphorical presence of 'stinky sheep' and 'poison ivy.' These elements symbolize negative influences and experiences that caused the speaker pain and discomfort. However, the poem takes a positive turn as the speaker recounts the arrival of a new day and the awakening from a troubled sleep. The falling star represents a moment of revelation or a significant event in the speaker's life. It brings a sense of hope and possibility. The reference to the saint of the speaker's soul re-entering suggests a spiritual or inner awakening, bringing strength and a renewed sense of purpose. The saint's gaze, described as looking at the speaker 'differently, ' indicates a transformative perspective. The vision of change for the best signifies personal growth and a shift in outlook. It suggests that the speaker's experiences have led to a positive transformation, fostering resilience and an improved mindset. The poem concludes with the idea of 'happy endings.' This phrase implies that despite the difficulties faced, the speaker has found contentment and fulfillment. The phrase 'I lived the life million times' suggests that the speaker's journey and experiences have been rich and profound. They have overcome their struggles, freeing themselves from negative influences and reaching a state of happiness. Overall, 'Changes Within' is a poem that explores the themes of personal growth, resilience, and finding joy after overcoming hardships. It conveys the transformative power of experiences and relationships, ultimately leading to a sense of fulfillment and happiness.
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