Monday, January 21, 2019

Chicken Memories Comments

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When I look upon this country scene
It warms my heart immediately
It brings back many memories
That means the world to me.
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Marilyn Lott
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Jazib Kamalvi 01 February 2019

Such a nice poem, Marilyn Lott. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Bri Edwards 21 January 2019

nice. i'd prefer more punctuation, at least a period at end of line 3 so i wouldn't think you were following memories with means. ;) i think it 'hurt' the chickens more than it hurt you...to be 'disposed of'. to MyPoemList. bri (:

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Marilyn Lott

Marilyn Lott

Washington state USA
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