Chirr As Wheels Of A Plane Whirs On Dual Lanes Of Life (Syllabic Verse) Poem by Harindhar Reddy

Chirr As Wheels Of A Plane Whirs On Dual Lanes Of Life (Syllabic Verse)

Rating: 4.5


Chirr
LIGHTS on
plane Whirs
On dual lanes!
Life has been a
Round the clock ratrace,
Cycling in the circles
with circus fetes in nonstop
Flapdoodles and an action packed
Two-in-one drama with trauma and
and hungama - On lighter days: Swiftly
and merrily life's sunny hours flint by, hey
Gratefully, cheerfully as they fly with sparkly
Green flints and blue glints Versus life on darker nights:

Dark thoughts are jammed at a junction with Punctured
Tyres where fuse's blown, filaments are cut, fire's
Extinguished ow! Life's chasing a black
cat in the dark room in dark night
With light off while a mocking
birds mock and wolves yell
gloom repeats on itself
Sun shines and rain falls;
Grin or grieve
Live or die,
Life goes on
With nature's
Bliss cripes!

(Form: HARI-BULB)

Wednesday, May 6, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: duality,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
((Note: HARI-BULB, a poetic form with a syllabic count me do you in
1-2-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9-10-11-12-12-11-10-9-8-7-6-5-3-3-3-3
Named after its shape BULB and its introducer's name (HARI
Truncated form of)V. Harindhar Reddy in 2015 at poemhunter.com
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A marvelous poem that presents the faces of life. Life has its ups and downs. We must always be prepared if darkness comes. We must be vigilant so as not to be taken to the realm of nothingness. A lively write. The poignancy of some verses were tamed by the lovely rythym.

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Harindhar Reddy 18 May 2020

Thank you for such generous review 🙏🙏👍👍

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Haliya, Hyderabad, India
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