Monday, December 12, 2016

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no sun rose over the hills this morning
and i was gathering my dog-hands around the keyboard
to let them show you the latest tricks i taught them
i sent you some pictures with cloudless skies
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Paul Gabriel Sandu
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Elena Sandu 17 December 2016

Breath taking read, brilliant penning, your poem touch the depths of soul, thank you for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 13 December 2016

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and elegantly brought forth in good poetic diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Paul.

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Paul Sandu 14 December 2016

I'm glad you liked it

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Kim Barney 12 December 2016

A very dark poem but very entertaining. I liked the line: There is beauty everywhere. A good start with your first poem. Welcome to Poem Hunter!

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Paul Sandu 14 December 2016

Thank you, Kim!

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