Thursday, November 19, 2015

Clean Slate Comments

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My sweetheart I know your heart is a clean slate
Please write down my name on it as fortune or fate
My love is attracted when your beauty accelerate
Your charm is alluring your style is really great
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan
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Anil Kumar Panda 19 November 2015

It seems you have written it for some one you are in love with. Very nice.

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Thanks a lot Anil Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Billy Loving 19 November 2015

Enjoyed reading your poem, just need to clean up the grammar a little.

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Thanks Billy for reading my poem.As for as your point regarding grammar is concerned, I wonder is there any grammar in poetry.If after all there is please mention it.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Abbottabad Pakistan
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