My sweetheart I know your heart is a clean slate
Please write down my name on it as fortune or fate
My love is attracted when your beauty accelerate
Your charm is alluring your style is really great
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Enjoyed reading your poem, just need to clean up the grammar a little.
Thanks Billy for reading my poem.As for as your point regarding grammar is concerned, I wonder is there any grammar in poetry.If after all there is please mention it.
It seems you have written it for some one you are in love with. Very nice.
Thanks a lot Anil Col Muhammad Khalid Khan