Cleaning Up His Mess Poem by Derrick Thompson

Cleaning Up His Mess

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His deep voice beckoned my back to my room
To complete a task I had done before.
But now I was to clean up his mess
As if wiping up his spilled milk.

The warm air filled of musk
I was directed to the fold.
The creamy liquid coating folds I knew well
His large hand, palming my head like a basketball,
Pushed me in to clean his mess.

The briny taste filling my mouth and scortching my throat.
I worked until he was satisfied.
But my labors gave her none of the old pleasure
And the walled echoed with their mocking laugh.

Thursday, November 7, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: basketball
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A continuation of the evening in Havana.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Amrutha 25 November 2013

nice work............................

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Saint Cynosure 19 November 2013

WOW...like this a lot...

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Amos Christopherson Masereka 07 November 2013

Cleaning Up His Mess, i like it, its emotional

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