Cleanliness And Whores Poem by Jan Oskar Hansen

Cleanliness And Whores



Cleanliness and Whores

The ship was old once it had been a big ship now it was small
it had been overtaking by time, its shower system had sea water
which was nice enough to cool off when it was hot.
After having a shower, you needed a bucket of fresh water to rinse
the salt away if not you would scratch all night have irritated skin
For month we did not have a proper wash when our ship docked in
Bremerhaven for repairs and we got fresh water found I had
an extra pair of socks I didn't know about
it was wonderful having a hot shower I stayed under it til someone
complained I was using all the warm water, even today the sense
of cleanliness makes me shudder with delight.

Whatever I had done in my youth the night before it helped
to have a shower and wash the sin away the smell of "life buoy."
the only soap we knew about, made the difference the whores
loved it they knew you were clean seamen

Friday, January 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: fairytale
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lantz Pierre 27 January 2017

The closing pun is worth the price of the whole show, which ain't so bad as sea-faring narratives go. Refreshing, I guess, is the proper response.

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