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...And Sweet Was My Love

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….And Sweet was My Love

I had met her in the town where I went to school,
about an hour train ride from my town. She was
very sweet and I had met her parents they lived in
a big house that had a bathroom, a novelty for me,
mind I used the public baths near my home.

A Saturday she came to visit my mother, who
didn’t say much, it was like she was feeling shy,
and didn’t offer us anything to eat, my girlfriend
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Aww a free verse ballad, interesting sensational story poem, love affair ending due to low financial status eh. Kudos!
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A B Faniki 05 October 2019
Fine ballad. Thanks for sharing such an elegant and brillaint piece. I loeved it
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Dr Antony Theodore 30 March 2016
A love affair ended. she was shocked to see how poor i was. human mind and its mysteries. love and its mysteries. well portrayed. thank you dear poet. tony
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Indeed a sweet sad story.
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Chinedu Dike 11 December 2014
A lovely romantic narrative well put together. I wish to state here that, mere acquisition of material benefits is not a sign of personal superiority. Thanks for sharing this poem. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
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Emma Adamyan 16 July 2009
im shocked too. y my comment is the first? i wonder, what do ppl read in here? perhaps those who think that shine/mine is a poetry. well, poor those who dont read ur poem. i mean it. thanks
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