Wednesday, September 6, 2017

Clock Eclipse Comments

Rating: 4.8

Everyday,
Without delay,
Two clock arms,
One long
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Paul Hartal
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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 September 2017

Two clock arms travel forth without delay. Application of metaphor and wise humor is seen here in this poem. An amazing poem is drafted and shared that expresses your cleverness....10

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Jazib Kamalvi 06 September 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Paul, with unique title. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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