Scorpio Virgo


Close Enough To Miss - Poem by Scorpio Virgo

A natural flow she comes by;
Beautifully adorned, nothing new but far from ordinary.
Oh, to burst the chains of time,
to move close, drawing in every part.
To taste her breath, sweet and wet.
Close enough to miss.

Responsibility interrupts,
walls of expectations divide.
Reality is formidable;
There is hope in a glance;
Yet discretion must rule.
Close enough to miss.

The ox carries us through the day.
Unconsciously, I deliberately wander through the fields;
Rewarded by her gorgeous smile and gleaming eyes.
Magnetic, penetrating, subduing,
I am slain and filled with life.
She's close enough to miss.


Comments about Close Enough To Miss by Scorpio Virgo

  • Ronn Michael Salinas (1/25/2010 10:43:00 PM)


    do it afar, I guess. (Report) Reply

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  • (1/25/2010 10:28:00 PM)


    to burst the chains of time

    yes it seems to haunt many artists, a concept addressed in many artistic works.
    read Song Of My Love for one of my answers I enjoyed your lines
    so much reminds me of poems I wrote in a rural setting thank you: -)
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  • (1/25/2010 10:27:00 PM)


    to burst the chains of time

    yes it seems to haunt many artists, a concept addressed in many artistic works.
    read Song Of My Love for one of my answers I enjoyed your lines
    so much reminds me of poems I wrote in a rural setting thank you: -)
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 25, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 4, 2010


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