Lore Me34

Veteran Poet - 1,449 Points (March 10,1967 / Chicago, IL. USA)

Clouded Mind - Poem by Lore Me34

I try to think of other things but my mind clouded.
Clouded with the smell of her hair;
The sensation of her touch;
The sparkle in her eyes,
and the taste of her sweat when a passionate moment arises.
As I said I try think of other things but I can't.
She clouds my mind.


Comments about Clouded Mind by Lore Me34

  • (7/27/2006 12:09:00 AM)


    Beautiful. Sensual.. Lovely poem, Ronald.

    Love, Fran xx
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  • (7/26/2006 9:29:00 PM)


    How beautiful she must be to captivate you so completely! Such imagery for a clouded mind! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 26, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 19, 2010


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