Clown Poem by Marvin Reeds

Clown

Rating: 3.0


Paint me a smile on my sad face
A tear that I cant trace, Erase,
I want to pick up the pace and race
But I'm limping.
I am an unstable being, Bipolar
Fake smile, the Joker.
I wear this mask of civility before my audience acting noble like a King.
A humble vaudevillian, my acts are puzzling, dazzling.
A man of my age does not complain nor rage, strange.
So I close my eyes and stop my heart away from the world of hypocrites

WRITTEN BY MK_REEDS

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It is for those who abhor every day hypocrites that we call friends
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luis A. Estable 31 July 2021

Yes, this person is in pain. The first verse wants a smile, but the second asks for a tear. The logic here is mixed. Though this shows anguish, I don`t attack the feeling, but the poetry could be a better excellence.

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