Coach Poem by M.J. Lemon

Coach

Rating: 5.0

he died how he lived
with his right hand on his balls
feet in the dugout

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 July 2026

Cont....please read baseball coach instead of basketball coach. It is hard to amend the comments here...

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 July 2026

A brilliantly crafted poem that captures the essence of a traditional, old school sports figure. It depicts lifelong dedication as a basketball coach. Succinct and raw in memory of a great person. A favorite.

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M.J. Lemon 28 July 2026

Thank you, Rose Marie. Indeed this was a real memory about a real person. It was a long time ago, and haven't thought about the coach in years. Thanks so much for reading!

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Richard Wlodarski 20 June 2026

That's the great thing about poetry, my friend...so many different interpretations. I love picking up on the subtle! That's an art form in itself!

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Richard Wlodarski 05 June 2026

2) Very witty and mysterious. Thanks for keeping us guessing.

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Richard Wlodarski 05 June 2026

Sounds like the ballsy Kerouac who was a huge fan of baseball and could have been an NFL superstar.

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M.J. Lemon 13 June 2026

I can always count on you, Richard, to pick up the subtle. Yes, I was thinking about Kerouac and a mention of an old baseball coach came up. He was the inspiration, setting an example many years ago. He was known for 'resting' in the dugout and having trouble with his spirits.

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