Tuesday, November 17, 2015

Cobwebs And Darkness Comments

Rating: 4.5

What others see-I do not see.
What others feel-I can not return.
They say it's a bright and shiny light.
All I see are cobwebs and darkness.
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Lex Cullen
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Kelly Kurt 17 November 2015

Accepting loneliness is a feat, but worth it. Thanks, Lex

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Lex Cullen 06 January 2016

It truly is, an obstacle within life that us humans learn to find a way around.

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Souren Mondal 17 November 2015

A metaphorically rich poem with vivid imagery and a wonderful 'story' to tell, which is as haunting as it is beautiful.. Excellent work Britain.. Excellent.. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and welcome to Poemnunter...

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Lex Cullen 06 January 2016

Thank you, I love metaphors because they show an image but also a feeling from the heart without going too deep.

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