Wednesday, April 9, 2008

Code Of Illusion Comments

Rating: 5.0

I came I saw
Sun has left bye
Leaving few shadow behind
Tear falls by few drops
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Dr subhendu kar
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Dragon Wizard 22 August 2009

It is enticing. A reminescence of the lifting of Maya´s veil. An insightful view of a soul in search of becoming Light. Beutifully written! My respect to you!

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Michelle Kafka 10 August 2009

Nice poem on illusion. Like the mention of a tea cup, dreams, and art. Thanks for sharing.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 June 2009

'Dream when intends to curve the art By virtual paints passion overhauled By the assemblage of the benign grace' An excellent poem on illusion. Love the above lines most,10+++

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Emancipation Planz 19 April 2008

I found wonderment and beautiful metaphors throughout this piece.. thank you Subham!

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