Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 6,539 Points (Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

Code Of Illusion - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

I came I saw
Sun has left bye
Leaving few shadow behind
Tear falls by few drops

My quest as sodden when entreated
Over the image less village deity
And I search upon pages after pages
The asphalt dusts of divine

Illusion dispels
By the narrow ending of the day
The breath dispenses
By tone earthly attired

Yet I avert by the shadow
When arraigned
bullet or dog artless
Car honks on the street in descibles

Dream when intends to curve the art
By virtual paints
passion overhauled
By assemblage of benign grace

Silence peeps in when bold
Withholding the vastness
When I find the golden rays
Locked in undertones of tea cup

Deciphering the code of illusion
All spaces of secret identity
Listlessly baling all elated dreams
I simply aspire the gleams

Comments about Code Of Illusion by Dr subhendu kar

  • (8/22/2009 4:40:00 PM)

    It is enticing. A reminescence of the lifting of Maya´s veil. An insightful view
    of a soul in search of becoming Light. Beutifully written!
    My respect to you!
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  • (8/10/2009 6:36:00 PM)

    Nice poem on illusion. Like the mention of a tea cup, dreams, and art. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (6/27/2009 7:47:00 PM)

    'Dream when intends to curve the art
    By virtual paints
    passion overhauled
    By the assemblage of the benign grace'

    An excellent poem on illusion.
    Love the above lines most,10+++
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  • (4/19/2008 2:21:00 AM)

    I found wonderment and beautiful metaphors throughout this piece.. thank you Subham! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 9, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 11, 2009

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