Saturday, July 2, 2011

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Rating: 5.0

one heart breaks to break another,
weep your metal bends and flakes,
time is lost and nought is healing,
chip the jagged wind with frost,
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Alexander Thompson
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 02 July 2011

It was a marvellous poem written with great skill and wisdom. Great imagery and a fine style. Liked and rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4.

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