Cold Poem by Richard D Remler

Cold

Rating: 5.0

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Nights like this are sparse and few,
Always old and never new.
Always dark and cold and plain,
Like the tap tap tap of winter rain.

They bring a wind that breathes a chill,
Empty, sullen, stark, unreal.
In their bleak and dire jubilee
To steal what there is left of me.

Copyright © MMXIII Richard D. Remler

Friday, October 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: experience,hopelessness,sadness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
"Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too.
They live inside us, and sometimes, they win."

~Stephen King
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walker 16 February 2019

Stephen King is undoubtedly right. I think that you link the cold, windy nights very effectively with your state of mind: ' To steal what is left of me'. A poem which I like very much.

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Ruth Walters 01 February 2019

I like the rhythm of this one, nice write :)

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