Her Poem by Richard D Remler
Her
......
I don't like her.
I don't like her at all.
She smokes too much,
Or so I think.
And the music that makes her smile,
Makes my eyes
Water profusely.
Thump thump twang thump twang
Be still heart!
No, I don't like her.
I don't like her at all.
Yet, sometimes,
Not often,
When she looks my way,
It's like I'm seeing a rainbow
For the first time.
And my throat catches,
And I have to take the deepest breath.
And some quiet cool place within my soul
Melts just a little.
And sometimes,
Not often,
A smile is there.
And the clouds that shadow
My graying sky
Part
However briefly,
And I see the sun a gain.
And it is a beautiful thing.
No, I don't like her.
Still, sometimes,
Not often,
When I am not here.
When I am away,
Far away from this place,
I see her,
And I am without excuse.
I am a prisoner
So taken by her
That time itself seems to stop,
At least for me,
And I lose every important thought,
Everything that has substance
And meaning.
She is everything then,
The sunrise and the sunset,
All that I should ever want,
Or need.
And I have to drink her in,
All the wonder of her
Without measure.
The brilliant glow of her wild eyes.
Her stubborn chin.
Unique beauty struggling to be noticed.
To be loved.
To love.
No, I don't like her.
I don't like her at all.
Copyright © MMXI Richard D. Remler
peanut butter quite like
unrequited love."
- Charlie Brown
I am a prisoner So taken by her That time itself seems to stop, At least for me, .......... superb loving poem; love is latent here in the heart of writer; the love is now in the sensitive tenderness; the love will awake to posses everything entirely/// from me 10+ for this beautiful poem
She is everything then, The sunrise and the sunset, All that I should ever want, Or need. her in deed u do young man at the beginning unrequited love is striking then once all starts is peeking all said and done sexy poem read mine some MOMS SMILES IF u haven't
A well written poem with powerful expression - - - 'Trying not to love, but being drawn into that attraction '
RE: Your Charlie Brown quote- - That little red-headed girl must have been giving him trouble again! You have written a fine poem, with a twist. Puts me in mind of the song by 10CC 'I'm not in love', where he's fighting and resisting it with all his might and being!
Nicely written verse, tracing the sentiment from aversion to attraction and love. Well done.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 10:36:00 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I do like your poem. Very, very much! I love its style, the way it flows and reaches so beautifully and naturally the reader's mind and heart with a charm hard to compare or find. And I love the way you have written the swinging, teasing love it shares.