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Her

Rating: 5.0

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I don't like her.
I don't like her at all.

She smokes too much,
Or so I think.

And the music that makes her smile,
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Her
Sunday, February 24, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: attraction,criticism,like,love,relationship,romance,silly
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
"Nothing takes the taste out of
peanut butter quite like
unrequited love."

- Charlie Brown
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 25 February 2019

I do like your poem. Very, very much! I love its style, the way it flows and reaches so beautifully and naturally the reader's mind and heart with a charm hard to compare or find. And I love the way you have written the swinging, teasing love it shares.

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 April 2020

I am a prisoner So taken by her That time itself seems to stop, At least for me, .......... superb loving poem; love is latent here in the heart of writer; the love is now in the sensitive tenderness; the love will awake to posses everything entirely/// from me 10+ for this beautiful poem

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 April 2020

She is everything then, The sunrise and the sunset, All that I should ever want, Or need. her in deed u do young man at the beginning unrequited love is striking then once all starts is peeking all said and done sexy poem read mine some MOMS SMILES IF u haven't

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Bharati Nayak 28 February 2019

A well written poem with powerful expression - - - 'Trying not to love, but being drawn into that attraction '

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Practicing Poetess 26 February 2019

RE: Your Charlie Brown quote- - That little red-headed girl must have been giving him trouble again! You have written a fine poem, with a twist. Puts me in mind of the song by 10CC 'I'm not in love', where he's fighting and resisting it with all his might and being!

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C F 25 February 2019

Nicely written verse, tracing the sentiment from aversion to attraction and love. Well done.

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