Thunder In The Snow Poem by Richard D Remler

Thunder In The Snow

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The clouds are thick with wonder here,
And dance across my sky.
I've never seen such twilight
Amble ever softly by.

Of course, there are no stars tonight
In this shroud of blue and white.
The cornfields lay so barren here
In this dark and twisting light.

A wind cold as abandon,
Breathes a frost so cruely blued,
And sweeps in through these empty trees
To mock the gentle solitude.

And it whispers empty promises
That tease and toy and taunt,
The bitter dark and nothingness
Inside this echo of a haunt.

And the branches crick under the weight
Of snow I cannot see,
And somewhere in the drifting blue
Tomorrow calls to me,

A voice so sad and soft as silk,
Sailing on the morrows wings,
Whispered so I almost miss
The melody she sings-

And as I am less than nothing,
Small as any speck of clay,
I listen to her song tonight,
Before she drifts away.

And I drink in all her beauty
And marvel all the more,
As the snows echo with a thunder
I have never heard before.


Copyright © MMXII Richard D. Remler

Monday, January 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: experience,nature,snow,winter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
"Wherever you go, no matter what the weather, always bring your own sunshine."
Anthony J. D'Angelo
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walker 24 July 2019

An irresistible lyric about the clouds at twilight-a time of day which appeals to me. Well constructed quatrains too.

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Bree Z Love 15 February 2019

Beautiful imagery and irony.💛

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Kim Barney 10 February 2019

Nice. I especially like the line 'Tomorrow calls to me'. For some reason, that phrase is extremely pleasing.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 January 2019

wonderfully delineated the thunder- it whispers empty promises That tease and toy and taunt, The bitter dark and nothingness Inside this echo of a haunt./// beautiful poem

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Gajanan Mishra 28 January 2019

No stars to night, beautiful and bright

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