Laurence Overmire


Cold Driving Rain - Poem by Laurence Overmire

It’s raining.
Cold driving rain.
Commuters rushing home from work
Home to hubby, wife and family
Spot and Cleo
And a fire on the stove.
Another day of brutal business
Accounts are squared
And errands run
No more phone calls
No more hassles
Watch some boob tube
Think of sex
Spare some change, sir
Spare some change, ma’am
I haven’t eaten for three days
You haven’t washed for three days either
Get a job, you dirty bum
I wonder how my stocks are doing
Shelter some money in a tax-free fund
Spare some change, sir
Spare some change, ma’am
Walk past quickly and ignore him
He just wants a shot of booze
Please sir
Spare some change, sir
And the rain keeps pouring down...

All is quiet on the street now
Two a.m. of a Tuesday night
All is quiet, all is peaceful
Save for the drizzling of the rain
Gently tapping
The lifeless body
Huddled on the pavement
Spare some change.


(Previously published in Rinse & Repeat, Scars Publications,1999; The Poet's Porch, Nov.2000, Poetry Soul to Soul, Apr.2002; World's Strand Anthology,2008)


Comments about Cold Driving Rain by Laurence Overmire

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (4/2/2008 7:59:00 PM)


    The homeless, are societies eye-sore, because we have not done enough to address and abrogate this problem...And so, in essence we have inflicted that sore upon ourselves. Commendable work, Laurence...Crisp, tight, and mellifluous stanzaec architecting...Effulgent imagework...Intriguing storyline...Keep that Pen pumpin'!

    ~ FjR ~
    ..2008..
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 2, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 5, 2008


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