Cold Wait. Poem by Fay Slimm

Cold Wait.

Rating: 5.0


Today the summer sun warms not my heart.
The bluest vaulted sky has no allure.
Each breath is long and merely sounds a sigh.
Time hangs a weight of iron round my mood.

To live by looking backward leaves a space.
Present moments wither with stifled hope.
This cold wait overheats my salty tears.
The summer ended when you went away.

Thursday, August 6, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: leaves,summer
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Gibson 07 August 2009

Each moment is a life time, I can feel that your apart! no other man will ever receive, . the love that's in your heart totally, its given, nevermore, to be won that stupid man has missed out! Fay Finnish this!

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Laurie Hill 06 August 2009

So very well written, so poignant that it touches the reader with its sadness.....

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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