Monday, October 16, 2017

Color Me Lonely Comments

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Color me lonely.
Went to my hometown
No one is around.
The landscape has changed,
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chris schwartz
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Khairul Ahsan 29 October 2017

'Just color me lonely We are all just dust On the sandscape of time' - liked this expression of a pensive thought. Perhaps, 'sandscape' in the last line should be read as 'landscape'? - Just a curiosity, no spelling check.

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Beautiful poem Chris Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 October 2017

The landscape has changed, so colouring of life is urged before time on the sandscape. Brilliant poem is shared.10

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