Monday, December 1, 2014

Colorless End Comments

Rating: 4.8

Thousands of days I waited, for my day to be brighter,
Stood up clueless, on when to stop this matter
Days were spent dreaming of you and I, painting together
Picking up stones as we walk though the rocky shore of the river.
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Roseann Shawiak 15 December 2014

Great imagery, I can feel the sadness of being lonely beneath the lines - you have portrayed it beautifully and emotionally. Great poem, thank you so much for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Chinedu Dike 02 December 2014

A lovely romantic poem well put together. I like the articulation of the piece as it captured the essence of the poem - nostalgic feelings amidst loneliness. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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