Tuesday, May 26, 2015

Come And Take It Comments

Rating: 5.0

Come and take it,
take it from my hands.
It is yours if you want it,
and i know you are looking for it.
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Ynon Hermon
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Roseann Shawiak 01 February 2016

Beautiful poem resonating the obvious although not everyone will see it! Really liked this poem, great meaning hidden beneath the surface.10+ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Allotey Abossey 02 June 2015

Sometimes we ask, not knowing how the reply will be so we do not see it. At times we ask, expecting the reply in a certain way and if it comes out otherwise we do not take it bcos that's not what we wanted. We need to trust who we ask. Thanks for sharing my friend

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Kelly Kurt 27 May 2015

It was always there. Sometimes we just miss the obvious. Thanks for sharing, Ynon

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