Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi


Come With Me, Darling.. - Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

come with me darling,
we shall go for shopping,
we can look for many things,
that are warm and melting.

Have you heard my heart beating,
to the vibration your sighting,
what portion that you having,
that makes me obeying.

we have found a commodity,
that has many identities,
It is a confidence booster,
comfort that we needed.

When I cry, this makes you to wipe my tears,
When I look sick, this makes you to look at me deeper,
when I am down, this makes you to lift me up higher,
When I am in trouble this makes you to pull me to you closer.

Caring is the elixir, that makes our life happier,
Caring is the doctrine, that guide us to be merrier,
Caring is the wonderful feeling, selfless with out barriers,
Caring is the only bond that keeps us all together.

Come with me darling,
we shall go for shopping,
we can look for one thing,
that is warm and melting! !


Comments about Come With Me, Darling.. by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

  • (5/15/2012 10:00:00 AM)


    Beautiful poem dear friend, but I have poem inspired by this poem. I am posting it under the title
    'careful! Care is beautiful bluff!
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  • Wahab Abdul (5/15/2012 1:47:00 AM)


    only caring, this is different from your other descriptive poems, i like it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 14, 2012



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