House Of Joy! Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

House Of Joy!

Rating: 4.8

The house full of just played toys, ,
Just fed bowls, just torn papers,
Newly added drawing to walls,
What a pleasure to eyes and souls,

kids are there in those houses,
Growing as inquisitive as they have to be,
Let them play in their own houses,
Don't control them in name of rules,

Young mothers! don't toil too hard to please,
All notorious oldies of the world,
Young Mum, Teach your children the morals to be bold,
Enjoy your life with your husband and kids,

Unkempt house is not a contagious eyesore,
When kids are growing to be warriors,
Unkempt heart is a real curse and a dumpsite,
When old and young are comfortable with.

Wednesday, November 7, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: family,happiness,peace
The young mothers should be knowledgeable in developing the intelligence of their children. Some mothers are too bothered in the cleanliness of their home through disinfecting everything with harsh chemicals, which is very wrong and this action leads to lots health issues to their young kids, when they are young as well as after they grow up.

Mothers ignorance in scientific knowledge is the real reason for many health problems in the modern world..
Valerie Dohren 08 November 2012

Good advice Veeraiyah, well penned.

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Lyn Paul 09 November 2012

Well written, Let us have this House of Joy forever. Thank you

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Valsa George 10 November 2012

House is the only place, where we can take little liberties! Children shouldn't be tortured in our eagerness to keep the house spic and span! But they should be gently taught the lessons of orderliness! Good write! !

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Savita Tyagi 10 November 2012

Loved it. To have a house full with children's love and laughter is a blessing. Hope young mothers are reading your poem.

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Dave Walker 10 November 2012

A fantastic poem, I have a four year old, her toys and drawings are everywhere.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 April 2020

It is really a magnificent poem on family with it's health care and education to children. You have said rightly that mothers' ignorance in scientific knowledge is the real reason for many health problems in the modern world. Thank you dear madam for sharing this gem with us. Full vote.

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Chinedu Dike 26 December 2019

Well articulated and nicely brought forth in persuasive expressions with conviction. An insightful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 September 2016

Beautiful poem with good message to allow the children to play freely as well as teach them to keep things properly. Loved reading it.

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Rajendran Muthiah 15 August 2016

The children ought to be growing inquisitive! The educationists should catch this point.

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Dr John Celes 31 May 2016

yes, allow children to be and grow up like children. fine theme madam.

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