Comfort Me Poem by Victoria Crawford

Comfort Me



While drunken thoughts fight sober feelings,
Someone please remind me to breathe.
No one knows if this is the real thing,
And my restless heart beats imperfectly.

Shut my eyes so I can't see
All the things he's done to me.
Hold me close, don't let me go.
Kiss my lips both soft and slow.

Run your fingers through my hair,
Tell me you'll always be there.
And as I speak with trempling lips,
Caress me with your fingertips.
I'll tell all my secrets from my past,
If you promise you'll be my last.

Tuesday, April 22, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: lips
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

'I'll tell all my secrets from my past': as well as being good, it's probably most important thing.

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~ Jon London ~ 22 April 2008

A touching poem Victoria, feels real, reads true. Great work thanks for sharing all the best J.L

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