Thursday, December 17, 2009

Coming Home Comments

Rating: 2.7

I had taken the longest journey
Coming home when I was lost
By the signs of the dust of feet
The lion in the herd of sheep
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Kesav Easwaran 31 December 2009

a pleasing way to express what or how is one's first love...very unique Sadiq...i couldn't guess it was 'this way' you lost yourself there! good piece...10

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Lady Grace 29 December 2009

brief and smart..i notice that every sentence ends as statement...so good to read..very professional the way this is written.....elegant and super nice...

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