Commiting Suicid Poem by kelley hayward

Commiting Suicid

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i cut my wrist cuz im hurting
some one pleaz cloes the curtings
i want it to be dark so he cant find me
i want to go to sleep but it hurts
i just want to brake down and cry
or some times i just want to commit suicid

i lay my head down and i can see my self dieing
im just lieing there with my eyes shut
and my wrist is cut
and the blood is dripping
and i can her the raza cuting my skin
i not going to win no matter what
i just want to be happy but i cant
so the easy way out is to just end my life
it would eas my pain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Well, I know what it's like to just want to brake down and cry. Like nothing could ever be good. I don't know how long ago you wrote this, so I hope you're not still so upset. I wrote a poem, well it's not really a poem, but it's called A short story about killing myself, and I wrote most of it when I felt really solomn and suicidal, which was not too long ago. Idk, you might like to read it.

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Jessica Bailey 26 June 2008

kelley u need some help..seriously...like now

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Courtney Rosher 21 June 2008

omfg kelley baby i know how you feel our situations are pretty much the same nd i want you too kno if you ever want to talk feel free to call me or come see me i love you girl: [

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To me this poem is so sad, but I understand the depression.that can make your mind feel that there is nothing.I pray god helps you find some peace.

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Midnight Blood 12 June 2008

Now this poem is extremely deep, I like it because I know what happens when being in depression, and being suicidal I'd like to chat, if you want

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