Patience ''Cat'' Williams

Commitment (Love)

I say: I have to get off my chest before we go any further. I have kinda been lying about something. You know how every time you tell me you love me and I say I love you back? Well…

Yall aint’t doin nothing but arguing out side the door to my heart. And I just want everybody to back up of my darn doorstep. That’s right im kicking yall to the curb. Every time I feel I can trust someone in my heart they end up gettin in there and tearing everything apart. I just can’t keep going through that no more. Repairing a broken heart can take years. So I guess wat im tryin to say is if you give me the time I need ill let you in my heart. Because I don’t think I’m ready.

He says: For what?

I say: COMMITMENT

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 2, 2008

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Comments about Commitment (Love) by Patience ''Cat'' Williams

  • Tai Chi Italy (12/2/2008 6:47:00 PM)

    OMG PC Williams! lol You dare utter the 'C' word on poemhunter? I know the feeling you describe well, I am a gemini and need my space too, I love the message here. these thngs happen in there own space and time. Thanks for sharing your thoughts in poetic wisdom tonight, Tai

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