Common Discomfort Poem by Renee Marie

Common Discomfort



Listen up,
stand tall,
zip tight,
endure all.

Breathe, but don't make it clear;
as insides are breaking and shaking in fear.

Lighten up,
who, me
desperately craving
the way to live free.

Breathe, but don't make it loud;
as insides are screaming in a deaf-only crowd.

Lighten up,
who, you?
let's awaken together,
it's all we can do.

© Reneé Marie
2012

Sunday, October 28, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: listen,scream
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Taking a break from my full-time, Casualty Assistance Duties to six Families of Fallen Warriors. This poem was born during my trip to The Findhorn Foundation, Forres, Scotland, OCT 2012
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Renee Marie

Renee Marie

Danbury, CT USA
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