Complete Man Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Complete Man

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Days may pass and so the years
Some words still wait to enter the ears
Gives so much joy and happiness
A meaningful smile rushes on face

I tried to retain childhood
But rushed to youth due to rich food
All changes were taking place
In gradual manner but with rapid pace

Life was open like play ground
So many things were to be found
Destiny was to be shaped
And of course fame and name was to be capped

It was to be done in limited sphere
As nothing was open and looked bare
Something was to be created with tough competition
Life was asking it again and again with repetition

Off sight was not to be allowed
To go off the vision was not be followed
With vigorous drive to achieve the result
Even if was barred by tough challenge or insult

Family was standing like rock behind
But it was me who had to search and find
What was good and what could be found later
If I had to emerge as strong and trend setter

I loved the danger and always rushed
Tried whole heartedly and pushed
To come of victorious and smile gently
As life had tested success recently

I have every reason to feel elated
As strong reasons are now related
I have come off nicely on stage
As so much has been proved with the age

I shall now be called complete man
As it had no short comings of human
I have achieved it within normal capacity
With reasonable means and with fine quality

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2012

Days may pass and so the years Some words still wait to enter the ears Gives so much joy and happiness A meaningful smile rushes on face

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Anita Sehgal 19 September 2012

Interesting poem... the third para is specially great!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2012

Very Nice habib fathalli7 minutes ago PLS keep writing. Comment 0 upright

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2012

Colin Niloc14 minutes ago i enjoyed this v

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2012

i like the use of wording. Dale HindsLess than a minute ago it take you in the authors world and lets you see things from there point of view Comment +1 ok

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2012

Jennifer Martinez1 minute ago understood the poem but kinda confused, might be the wording

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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