Concepts Poem by Satish Verma

Concepts

Rating: 5.0


Your intent was to
peel off the frozen poem from
my lips to taste it.

Planting a seed daily
on my palm to start a blaze
for burning the book.

Look how I brace you
to move the steps one by one
to reach on my Sun day.

Tuesday, January 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 24 January 2018

Beautiful poem. Great expressions calling for closer look and deeper thought. Thanks. peel off the frozen poem from my lips to taste it.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 January 2018

Satish, such a fine poem...10+++

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