Deadbeat Poem by Satish Verma

Deadbeat

Rating: 4.5


To live again, I
will not come after dying for
you. Resurrection?

I ask the dust, when
did you slip from the moon
to kiss immortal?

Don't leave a cut
on the sandstone to mark
the anniversary.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 07 June 2019

Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulation for being chosen as the member poem of the poem of the day.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 June 2019

To live again! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Coltron 07 June 2019

I really didn’t mean it

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 June 2019

Great poem indeed. Touching....Congrats.

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Coltron 07 June 2019

I’m sorry dude I’m really am.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 November 2021

A brilliant poem! I liked your last stanza most! Top score!

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Khairul Ahsan 07 June 2020

Congratulations on your poem being chosen as the 'Member Poem Of The Day'! The last stanza of the poem is thought provoking.

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Kevin Patrick 07 June 2020

The only thing immortal is dust, and the memory lost in the wind. Thoughtful and meditative work, it lingers in the mind. Well chosen for poem of the day.

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Chinedu Dike 07 June 2020

A concise and insightful verse. A witty philosophical reflection.

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Bill Cantrell 07 June 2020

An outstanding poem rightfully selected as poem of the day, congratulations

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