Satish Verma

Gold Star - 53,252 Points (5-6-1935)

Deadbeat - Poem by Satish Verma

To live again, I
will not come after dying for
you. Resurrection?

I ask the dust, when
did you slip from the moon
to kiss immortal?

Don't leave a cut
on the sandstone to mark
the anniversary.

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Comments about Deadbeat by Satish Verma

  • (6/7/2019 11:56:00 PM)

    A meaningful and thought provoking deadbeat. Congrats on poem of the Day. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/7/2019 11:28:00 PM)

    Don't leave a cut
    on the sandstone to mark
    the anniversary............What a profound message to the society! Great stuff. Congrats on your positioning X
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  • Anil Kumar Panda (6/7/2019 9:20:00 AM)

    Great poem indeed. Touching....Congrats. (Report)Reply

    (6/7/2019 10:37:00 AM)

    I’m sorry dude I’m really am.

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (6/7/2019 8:20:00 AM)

    To live again!

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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    (6/7/2019 10:38:00 AM)

    I really didn’t mean it

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  • Drtony Brahmin (6/7/2019 8:18:00 AM)

    Don't leave a cut
    on the sandstone to mark
    the anniversary. in a very gentle way and in simple style you wrote a fine poem full of imagination. tony
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (6/7/2019 3:53:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulation for being chosen as the member poem of the poem of the day. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/7/2019 2:15:00 AM)

    Your last stanza is outstanding. (Report)Reply

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  • Mahtab Bangalee (6/7/2019 1:04:00 AM)

    death
    cannot touch
    the dust immortally!
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  • Sylvia Frances Chan (6/7/2019 12:33:00 AM)

    Congratulations for being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. A thought provoking poem. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/7/2019 12:15:00 AM)

    A interesting read, congratulations on poem of the day (Report)Reply

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  • (6/7/2019 12:11:00 AM)

    Well done, impactful with lesser words but powerful profundity. Congrats on POD poem of the day.... (Report)Reply

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  • Lyn Paul (5/19/2019 2:20:00 AM)

    You raise great thought with your words.
    If I may say....may I not return.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 19, 2019



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