.conciousness Poem by .phia .stardust

.conciousness

Rating: 5.0


sleep tight my darling
the time is near
sleep tight my babe
they are almost here.
kiss kiss my love
keep yourself above
my thoughts, their thoughts
our thoughts.
for this is the way we'll live our lives forever.
just not together.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Curtis 23 December 2008

I'm a big fan of these short pieces with something to say, very good.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 19 December 2008

ooooo goshhhh what a cute poem you have got here Phia! ! !

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Joseph Poewhit 18 December 2008

Last line is a real zinger

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