Confluence Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Confluence

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Dreams are dauntless
Teams are impassioned
With indomitable strength
To conquer commendable peaks

Enkindled by spirits
Which is distinct of it's kind
Confederates in conviction
To attain staggering heights
Allies determined

Take a plunge into the depths
Fevid and fearless
With perseverance
Bewitching and beguiling
A team of young confluence minds

Monday, February 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: youth
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The miracle of young minds
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 18 May 2016

Yes! To attain staggering heights in life. With determination. Nice work.

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Set your goal, reach it, thanks

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Nicely penned. Good efforts.

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some times thoughts over flow, we need to pen it, good or bad depends on the reader, poetry is just our feelings and emotions, its purely ours, thanks

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