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Dawn

Rating: 4.7

Oh! little stars..
Are you waiting for DAWN?
I am also like you...longing for DAWN!
When it dawns...
you will disappear;
but.....
In my longing for DAWN....
The DAWN itself will disappear! !

Tuesday, February 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: real life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
longing
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soul Watcher 16 February 2016

Oh, this an awesome Poem, thank you for sharing it with us.

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welcome, my heartful thanks

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Soul Watcher 16 February 2016

My pleasure..: -)

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Siddartha Montik 11 November 2016

Nice one speakings to Loving things!

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Rose Kanana 11 September 2016

longing can be elastic at times, nice words Munuswamy

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 11 September 2016

Thanks welcome

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Nice, neat play on words that is both sweet and satisfying to my poetic appetite!

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Dev Anand 10 July 2016

In my longing for DAWN.... The DAWN itself will disappear! ! this is symbolic writing........ longing and the realization that it will disappear. does it denote happiness or sadness dear poetess..? ?

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Unnikrishnan E S 21 May 2016

Hi Saraswathy, All through our lives, we long for things, not knowing that they are so short-lived. Many things we cherish to possess disappear, before we have even possessed it, like dawn. The sense of loss and void they create in our hearts are much bigger than our longing itself. Fantastic observation and exquisite imagery that make the poem extra-ordinary. Thanks for sharing.

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Happy to receive encouraging comments from a grounded person like you, mostly our dreams are like dew drops disappears very soon before we realise it's beauty, thanks

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