Confused Confessions Poem by Asha Hassan

Confused Confessions

Rating: 5.0


I'm trying to decide
How I feel about you
Would it damage your pride
If you gave me a clue?

I feel I'm being lost
And can't stay at your pace
Love and hate have a cost
I'm not sure I can face

Tuesday, November 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: confusion,first love,hate,heartache,heartbreak,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written when I was 16 about someone who liked to play games.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 30 November 2017

A fascinating little poem Asha! Love and hate have a cost.......nice line, well penned..10

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 November 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Asha H. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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